Sunday 16 October 2011

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This is highly proficient work - there are evident clear accounts of your planning and research for your music video production day after half term. You have persevered with completing the work this week, well done.

 I like the way in which decision making is evident along with reflection and revisions.  
You have provided a cast list and you some excellent work on set design.  

There are one or two ways to develop the blog.  First to begin using a wider range of blogging tools, if you can - there are lots of well presented images, but use of Flickr or powerpoint will increase the creativity that is shown on your blog.  

Second the valid, detailed and reflective comments that you make need to be developed further with  key media concepts and theoretical ideas;  for example, link the planning to star image,  or how set design and lighting link to mise en scene and/ or what model's of lighting you are using in relation to your set - key, fill, directional, discuss the intensity and colour and what you are trying to represent about your artist.
This will help make a more thorough evaluation of your work. 
Well done.

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